Subtitles and poetry

Ever thought of subtitling as a form of poetry?

At first glance, subtitling and poetry are very different things. But if you look closer, you’ll see they have a lot in common.

A colleague recently added to this perception the issue of the similarity between comic book translation and writing subtitles.

The shared challenge is conveying meaning within constraints.

Whether it’s a speech bubble, a subtitle line, or a poetic verse, the challenge is similar.

A subtitler must choose the right words to convey the essence of spoken words, often within a few characters, just like a poet picks words carefully to evoke emotion. And as we saw with comic book translation, the same principle applies – fitting a message into a tight frame.

Even though their goals are different, they have a lot in common.

Have you noticed how much sonnets and subtitles look alike?

Structural harmony

Sonnets: 10-syllable lines, rhythmically structured.

Subtitles: Limited to 42 characters per line, each word counts.

Form

Sonnets: Follow the iambic pentameter, with rhythm and flow.

Subtitles: Guided by character count, line breaks, and timing.

Message

Sonnets: Convey complex emotions and themes with depth.

Subtitles: Capture the essence of spoken dialogue in a concise format.

Word choice

Sonnets: Rich in metaphors, vivid imagery, and meaning.

Subtitles: Focus on clarity and conciseness, choosing words that convey the right feeling within a limited space.

Emotion

Sonnets: Deeply explore emotions, like love, sorrow, or longing.

Subtitles: Help viewers connect emotionally with a scene by matching the tone of the dialogue.

Balance

Sonnets: Balance creativity with rigid form.

Subtitles: Balance meaning with time and space limitations.

Poetry and subtitle work, comic book translation, require a good command of language and an understanding of how words can inspire feelings. It involves making a message clear and concise in just a few words.

Language is so powerful, yet the human hand is irreplaceable.

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